Pitch Feedback

Below is our pitch, made on Monday 12th September, to a group of people to which would potentially be our target audience.

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As well as the pitch, we received feedback on post-it notes, in the forms of questions and what they liked and disliked about our idea:

Questions asked& Answered:

Q. Costume & Make up?


The costumes can be sourced at charity shops or with personal items at home as it is fairly minimal, this interlinked with our make up being also minimal.


Q. What are the shot types?


We'll have a variety of shot types for our production, in order to give off all that we need to, following the stereotypes of cinematography, with the theories of isolation and lacking of dominance. As a comedy the shots will have to be varied to keep it interesting and comical, as it has to be varied.


Q. How are you going to make it funny?


We plan to make funny situations, with heightened reality and stereotypes for our products that reach the over-exaggerated levels.


Q. What comedy will it include?


The types of comedy included is going to be situations that "normal" people don't get themselves into, things that would be like saying stupid things or doing stupid stuff.


Q. Will shots of main character getting revenge spoil ending?


After a narrative change this question isn't as a concern, however we will keep the shots to the point where the ending is unknown.


Q. Do you have the range of actors/ locations needed?


As Jake does drama, we do have a range of actors and in terms of locations a lot of them are everyday locations that we can access.


Q. How does the narrative combine with the locations?


As a teenage comedy, we will be looking into the college style, everyday teenage lifestyle locations that reflect off the narrative.